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Trifles--the
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You know a lot about drama
because you see so much of it--tv, movies, videos, live drama (high school or
professional productions). Several years
ago I asked my class to list all the dramas they had seen in the last two
weeks. My plan was to define
"drama" inductively. That is,
by starting with what we felt was drama, we would come up with an
inclusive definition based on our own reality.
Try that now: jot down a list of
the dramas you have seen in the last two weeks.
When I heard the list of my
students, I had no problem with examples of movies, tv shows, videotapes, and
on-stage drama. The definition that
resulted was something like: a story
with characters acting out a conflict that is resolved. It didn't matter whether the story was on a
stage or filmed. It could even be a
street theater like those I'd read about sponsored by the charity Save the
Children to spread the word in Nepal among a largely illiterate population
about the dangers of AIDS. It could be
a tv series such as West Wing with multiple story lines but usually only
one resolution per episode.
But I realized that some of them
were working with a definition of drama that challenged mine. And that conflict made me want to sharpen my
definition, even though I learned from their example.
Would you include
#1? One student talked about seeing an argument at work between two co-workers. As the student explained the episode, I
could see how it fit a broad definition of drama: it was a conflict and it was resolved by the characters involved. If you really care about the READER/AUDIENCE in interpreting literature,
then my student was right. He created
the drama by noticing it as a drama.
But I was unhappy including this example. I wanted a drama to have meaning from an AUTHOR.
I wanted it to be shaped to have a meaning, so that it wasn't just an
inkblot that I could read meaning into--whatever I wanted it to
mean. Even if I didn't infer (conclude)
the same meaning as the author implied (that is, suggested), I wanted the drama
to have a reality that I could check with someone else. And that meant that it had to be scripted in
some way so that it was replicable, replayable--so I could discuss it with
someone else. See FAQ1 to understand how
people can hold different "reasonable" interpretations.
Yet I realized how important
the student's example was. Surely the
power of drama on stage (tv/moviehouse/video) comes from the basic human
instinct to understand the life we live (or wish for or fear) by taking it out
of our real life setting and putting it into a frame. In the case of drama, that frame is a stage of some sort. That is, at least in my definition, a
playwright does in literature what my student had done as an AUDIENCE to a
real-life episode.
Would you include
#2? Another student included in her list the funeral of England's Princess
Diana which she had seen on television that week. It was clearly "staged" in a particular order, with
much of what was said predictable based on the liturgy of the Anglican Church,
with characters such as her brother and the presiding clergyman. When questioned about conflict, the student
said it was between the grief of the participants and their belief that the
deceased had gone to a better place.
And it was replicable because it was filmed and could be shown
again.
Yet there was something in
the example that didn't seem to fit. I
remembered a broad definition of play as "rule-governed behavior
without serious consequences" (Johan Huizinga, Homo Ludens [Boston: BeaconP, 1955]). This definition covered drama as well as football games. What was it about the funeral that made it
seem weird to think of it as drama and almost disrespectful to think of
calling it a play? I would call
the funeral a ritual, but not a play.
A ritual has a script but the main character changes with each time it
is performed, and the results--on the main character and the audience--are
serious in emotional, spiritual or legal results, whether at a wedding, a
baptism, oath taking in a court of law or taking office as president.
New question: So
is Survivor or other "reality TV" shows a drama? Is a quiz show?
At the end of the
discussion, I realized that we all may have somewhat different definitions of
drama. The one I finally formulated was
this:
A drama is a scripted
story of characters in a conflict that gets resolved to make a point, and this
script can be repeated when actors perform a staged version (whether on stage,
in a film or television production).
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The Elements of Drama: Trifles
Definitions are only useful
if they help us see or do more. So
let's see what a definition can help us see with the one-act play Trifles by
Susan Glaspell. We'll use this example
throughout this segment on drama and in others as well.
Most definitions [hjs1]contain at
least the following five elements:
What do we gain from using
these definitions? Well, what do we
gain from having commonly accepted understanding of what a strike is in
baseball, or a home run, or a double?
That is, we can talk to each other more precisely and clearly about our
reactions and interpretations.
Action: For
example, in Trifles, if someone asked you what it was about, you might
say it's about how a woman murders her husband. Certainly the most sensational part of the play is the strangling
of Mr. Wright. But writing a summary of
the action shows the drama is not a murder but the detection of a
murder: Mrs. Hale and Mrs. Peters discover a motive for Minnie Wright's
murder of her husband and decide to hide the evidence from the authorities (the
county attorney and the sheriff, Mrs. Peters' husband).
Plotting: The
way the story is put together deals with the plotting or scripting of the
story. And the plotting helps
explain why the women act as they do.
In Aspects of the Novel (1927), the novelist E.M. Forster
defined the difference between plotting and story (what we're calling action)
with an example: Story is: the king
died and the queen died. Plotting
is: the king died and then the queen
died of grief. In a drama, it is useful
to notice the way the author puts the action together in presenting and
resolving the central conflict of the drama in the plot structure?
1. introduction of the conflict (exposition)
2. rising action or complication
3. turning point (climax)
4. falling action
5. resolution
Try formulating your own
list. The editors of the Norton
Anthology give one listing on pp.1029-1030, but that is not the only
answer. If you want to see a different
formulation from the editors' explanation, click here [hjs2]. (If you're interested in exploring the
question of why people come up with different interpretations, click FAQ2.) What did you decide was the turning
point? For example,
·
finding the bird?
·
Mrs. Peters saying a cat
got the bird?
·
Mrs. Hale taking out
the messy stitches?
It seems to me that the
reader sees a slightly different focus for the story depending on the
choice. If you are willing to play with
me--take a minute to think through or jot down your agreement or disagreement,
either before or after you check out my reasoning by clicking here[hjs3].
Our definition also stresses
an author ordering elements of the story to produce effects in the
audience. To check this out, consider the
order in which certain props are discovered.
There are two lists below: the
one on the left is the order of presentation in the play, the one on the right
is a re-ordering. What is lost by the
re-ordering?
Actual Order |
Scrambled Order |
Mr. Henderson criticizes
the dirty roller towel. |
Mrs. Hale finds the bird. |
Mrs. Peters finds the
quilting basket and Mrs. Hale notices one block of quilt with irregular
stitching.. |
Mrs. Peters finds the
birdcage with a broken door. |
Mrs. Peters finds the
birdcage with a broken door. |
Mrs. Peters finds the
quilting basket and Mrs. Hale notices one block of quilt with irregular
stitching.. |
Mrs. Hale finds the bird. |
Henderson says he's
searching for a motive--to explain the strangling method. |
Henderson says he's
searching for a motive--to explain the strangling method. |
Mr. Henderson criticizes
the dirty roller towel. |
If you saw the play in the
scrambled order, would that change your opinion of Mrs. Hale and Mrs.
Peters? Do you think a different order
might have changed what they thought and did?
I must confess that I tried to re-do the order so that Mrs. Hale and
Mrs. Peters find evidence of a link to the murder (strangulation of bird) and a
possible motive before they find the evidence that makes them identify with
Mrs. Wright's plight. Glaspell has
ordered the story elements in such a way that the women--and the
audience--understand Mrs. Wright's life before they get the final piece of
evidence--the dead bird.
The detective story deals
with what people can infer from evidence. For example, the men check whether any of the windows have been
tampered with. When they find no
evidence of breakage or broken locks, they infer that Mr. Wright was not
murdered by a person who gained illegal entry to the house and this inference
strengthens the case against Mrs. Wright.
The women see different kinds of evidence and are able to make
inferences from their knowledge of a woman's life and values and their sympathy
for her. Remember, authors imply,
audiences infer. Authors
often give evidence indirectly through implications because audiences believe
more fully if they figure something out for themselves. Authors are often advised: show, don't tell. And they get the audience involved when readers make inferences.
Characters: Understanding
the experience, personalities and values of the characters in the story
helps us to understand the story.
World: We
might know someone like Mr. Henderson today, but the world of the play
is different from our world in some important respects. Published in 1920, the play was Glaspell's
re-fashioning of her short story "A Jury of Her Peers" (1917),
available on-line at http://www.learner.org/exhibits/literature/story/fulltext.html
. The short-story title echoes the
provision in U.S. law that a person tried before a jury must have a "jury of
his peers." Yet at the time of the
short story and the play, women did not have the right to vote or to sit
on juries. Therefore, Minnie Foster
Wright's jury would not include any women--people who might look at the
evidence as Mrs. Hale and Mrs. Peters did.
Why is the short story called "A Jury of Her Peers" and
not "A Jury of His Peers"?
What sense does the play's title have?
What is a trifle? (As you
read on-line, you may find it useful to look up unknown words in http://www.miriamwebster.com .) Who uses the word?
Staging: All
the elements discussed so far--action, plotting, characters and world--apply to
fiction or poetry that tells a story.
But only drama has staging.
You are not told by the narrator how to take things, but must
infer them from what you see and hear --either on a stage, in a movie or in the
drama you create in your head as you read.
The language is not a narration but talk that is overheard. Sometimes stage directions will help you
"see," but at other times you will have to understand by reading
between the lines.
Example 1: Something is going on in the course of the
stage directions in the following passage about the quilt blocks the women have
discovered.
MRS.
HALE: Mrs. Peters, look at this
one. Here, this is the one she was
working on, and look at the sewing! All
the rest of it has been so nice and even.
And look at this! It's all over
the place! Why, it looks as if she didn't know what she was about! [After
she has said this they look at each other, then start to glance back at the
door. After an instant MRS. HALE has
pulled at a knot and ripped the sewing.]
What is each woman thinking
as she looks at the other? Why do they
glance back at the door? What does it
mean that Mrs. Hale pulls a knot and rips out the sewing?
Example 2: When Mrs. Hale opens the box with the dead
bird, she puts her hand to her nose.
After Mrs. Peters bends nearer, she also turns away. What does it mean that the bird in the cold
house has begun to smell[hjs4]?
Example 3: When the women realize the bird's neck has
been wrung, the Sheriff and County Attorney return. At what point does Mrs. Peters decide to lie, and why does she do
so? If you were playing Mrs. Peters or
directing the actress, how would you explain what's happening inside Mrs.
Peters and how would you communicate this to the audience by her actions and
tone of voice?
MRS.
PETERS:
Somebody--wrung--its--neck. [Their
eyes meet. A look of growing
comprehension, of horror. Steps are
heard outside. MRS. HALE slips box
under quilt pieces, and sinks into her chair.
Enter SHERIFF and COUNTY ATTORNEY.
MRS. PETERS rises.]
COUNTY
ATTORNEY: [As one turning from
serious things to little pleasantries.]
Well, ladies, have you decided whether she was going to quilt it or knot
it?
MRS.
PETERS: We think she was going to--knot
it.
COUNTY
ATTORNEY: Well, that's interesting, I'm
sure. [Seeing the bird-cage.] Has the bird flown?
MRS.
HALE: [Putting more quilt pieces
over the box.] We think the--cat
got it.
COUNTY
ATTORNEY: [Preoccupied] Is there a cat?
[MRS.
HALE glances in a quick covert way at MRS. PETERS.]
MRS.
PETERS: Well, not now. They're superstitious, you know. They leave.
Often authors involve us in
their drama through dramatic irony.
Imagine that you hear a character state an intention or opinion and you
know from the plotting that is not the case.
At the end of the play, when Mrs. Peters and Mrs. Hale have hidden the
dead bird in the box, the County Attorney says, "Oh, I guess they're not
very dangerous things the ladies have picked out [to take away to Mrs.
Wright]." If you are sitting there
saying something like, "Dummy! If
you only knew!" then you have understood the dramatic irony of the
situation. Dramatic irony tends to
involve us because, like inference, it is something we have figured out.
Look at the scene quoted
above for dramatic irony, especially Mr. Henderson's line, " Well, that's interesting, I'm sure. [Seeing the bird-cage.] Has the bird flown?"
Authors also imply meaning
through the use of symbolism. Symbols
are real things that have an ordinary or literal meaning, but have also
come to have a figurative or symbolic meaning attached to them. The American flag is a piece of cloth that
waves in the breeze, but it symbolizes the United States. There is a star for each state and 13 red
and white stripes commemorating the original 13 states that united to form the
country. In Trifles, consider the
dead bird. It is a pet dear to Mrs.
Wright in a lonely setting and the women infer that Mr. Wright has deliberately
killed the bird by wringing its neck.
What would be lost if Glaspell had used one of the following instead of
a canary?
On a literal level, we see
that a bird is just right for showing callousness. A cricket is a bug that doesn't seem too cuddly to most
people. And a cat is big enough for its
murder to seem like deliberate cruelty.
It is important for the conflict in the play to realize that Mr. Wright
is not evil. As Mrs. Hale says, he is a
"good man"--that is, "he didn't drink, and kept his word as well
as most, . . . and paid his debts. But
he was a hard man." But is that
enough to cover up Mrs. Wright's deliberate strangling of him? You may think that nothing justifies the
coverup by Mrs. Hale and Mrs. Peters, but if it is at all understandable to
you, it is because the author has made the bird symbolic of Mrs. Wright. For example, a canary sings (unlike a
cricket or a cat), and Minnie Wright used to sing in the choir before she
married. Mrs. Hale even says,
"Come to think of it, she was kind of like a bird herself--real sweet and
pretty, but kind of timid and--fluttery.
How--she--did--change."
Similar to symbols are conventions. Let's consider some examples before we
deal with a definition. It is a
convention to lower the flag to half-mast when a great person dies or a great
tragedy has occurred. Conventions are
actions agreed upon to have a particular but arbitrary meaning. Why shouldn't the flag be lowered 80% of the
mast or netted at full mast so that it doesn't wave in the breeze? That's not the convention. Another example is the convention of driving
on the right side of the road. In England,
people drive on the left side of the road.
One convention is not better than the other. It is an arbitrary decision, but it's important that everyone
accept it. There are several
conventions in drama, though these tend to change over time and depending on
the medium used. For example, in early
films there were no closeups because filmmakers feared that people would be
confused by the shift in people's size from full figure to closeups. In fact, early films essentially used the
size and angle appropriate to an audience at a stage production. Trifles was created for a proscenium
stage--that is, like a rectangular box with one long side missing, through
which the audience sees the action. (In
contrast, theater in the round places the audience all around the stage.) Other conventions of theater are:
[hjs1]My working definition
is " A drama is a scripted story of characters in a conflict that gets
resolved to make a point, and this script can be repeated when actors perform a
staged version (whether on stage, in a film or television production)."
[hjs2]introduction: Mrs. Hale and Mrs. Peters (the sheriff's wife) accompany their husbands to the Wright farm as the men investigate who killed Mr. Wright, starting with Mr. Hale's description of discovering the murder.
rising action: The importance of a motive is stressed, but also Henderson condescends to the women, even as they discover motives and evidence (dead bird).
turning point: Henderson sees the birdcage but Mrs. Hale lies about the bird and Mrs. Peters backs her. (They could still tell all.)
falling action: Mrs. Peters and Mrs. Hale explore justice issues. Mrs. Peters identifies more with Mrs. Wright and decides not to mention the bird.
resolution: Henderson says it's clear except for motive. Stage business shows both Mrs. Peters and Mrs. Hale are now actively involved withholding evidence.
[hjs3] Finding the bird gives concrete support to the motivation Mrs. Hale and Mrs. Peters are constructing for Mrs. Wright's murder of her husband. That means that the play is about the detection of a murder by women who have been dismissed as concerned with "trifles."
Mrs. Peters knows Mrs. Wright is upset by cats and therefore doesn't have one at home, yet she backs up Mrs. Hale's lie that a cat got the bird from the broken cage. This is the turning point because we see the first outright lie to the authorities, and neither woman mentions the dead bird they have just found. The falling action shows their deepening commitment to the decision to protect Mrs. Wright first made here, ending with shared responsibility for withholding crucial evidence.
Mrs. Hale and Mrs. Peters deduce from the stitching that Mrs. Wright was suddenly made upset. They exchange glances Mrs. Hale takes out the bad stitching, and the dialog shows both women suspect this could be considered as tampering with evidence. This is a turning point because Mrs. Peters could now turn in Mrs. Hale. The falling action shows Mrs. Peters commits to feminist loyalty despite her loyalty to her husband and her duty to the law.
[hjs4]I think it shows that the murder of Mr. Wright is pre-meditated. The bird carcass has begun to decompose, even in the cold house. Therefore, some hours or perhaps even a day passed between the killing of the bird and the strangling in bed of John Wright.